Last week, we discussed our fine-grained read with respect to argument formation (Hacker A3).
On Wednesday, we're going to get into larger groups–pairs of pairs, specifically. Your editing team will walk another editing team through your edits so far. At this point, you should also have some notes to share with them regarding the outstanding issues that you have not yet addressed fully. The other editing team will then do the same for you, walking you through their document.
We'll go away and read Hacker C3 and C4 (Revising and Writing Paragraphs), and then do an edit pass on a new document. Our goal in this editing pass will be to read each paragraph for coherency–does each paragraph "work" in some way according to Hacker? And, does each paragraph lead into the next; if not, we need to flag (and perhaps fix) those paragraphs that are disjoint from one-another.
